Thursday, April 06, 2006

~ partha mudhal nalle-II ~

Megha reaches home, removes her shoes..one goes flying near her friends feet. Places the bag of groceries in the middle of the hall and sits in the couch.
Priya- hey what happened?
Megha- andha payan..cha..
Priya-endha payan?
Megha- theriyadhu di..store la parthen..romba tension pannitan..
Priya-payan parka eppdi irrupan?(she winks)
Megha- unn kitta sonnen paaru….parka nalla karrupa senthil maari iruppan..
Priya- chi..sollu di…
Megha- yen di evlo alaira..adhan pradeep kitta number vangine illa…
Priya- pradeep aa.avana vidu..…seri evan appdi irrupan sollu?
Megha- nalla than di irruppan…kitta thatta aarya maari irruppan parka..
Priya-wow..seri..pradeep just called, he invited us for lunch tomorrow at his place. Your coming with me..seriya
Megha- hey..what am I going to do there, nan varala..nee mattum po
Priya- chance eh illa…neeyum vara…sollitten..avalavdhan…

While on the other side, karthik parks his car and runs to his apartment.
Pradeep- yen da ivlo late?
Karthik-don’t ask me any questions, apparam andha bajari oda mugam nyabagam vandhurum…
Pradeep-bajari ya….hey hey..yaaru andha bajari.
Karthik-i said no questions..
Pradeep- fineeee…seri open the door..habba been waiting for more than 45 mins


They both go in..karthik turns on the T.V..
Pradeep-machi I got this new tamil movie..its in my bag….put it da
Karthik-oh seri..hold on..


He inserts the DVD…movie title Sandai Kozhi..
Karthik-oh damn..enna da padam idhu…cha..sandai kozhi…I don’t want to watch it..
Pradeep- dai..r u Ok…inna matter n ozhunga sollu da…
Karthik explains the whole drama that took place…
Pradeep-hahaha..ivlo than matter aa..nan vera ennamo n ninaichen…take it easy da..ur not gonna meet her again..forget about it..seri….how does she look?
Karthik-hmm..very cute da..siricha azhaga irrupa…anna pavum..avalluku sandai poda than theriyum n ninaikiren..lol….dai dai..stop reminding about her I said I want to forget about her..
Pradeep- haiyoo…enna da avlo distract pannitala..
Karthik-hmmm…nah..i don’t fall into girls trap that easily..seri come lets watch south Africa Vs Australia match…I rented that DVD…
They both fell asleep watching the match till 5.30 am in the morning.

11.30 am
Karthik- aiyooooo pidari….
He wakes up pradeep from sleep..
Pradeep-huh..dai dai..enna achi..dreams layum ava thana...kalakku..whats the time…aiyo 11.30..i have invited priya for lunch..i have to clean the house…take shower..buy something..so much work..damn..

12.30 am
Pradeep- machan I am going to take shower..get up da naye..its afternoon..
karthik- huh..seri..
he goes back to sleep again..

After five minutes..door bell rings..
Karthik- cha..yevan avan..indha nerathla..
He gets up..looks in the mirror…his hair in the most crappiest style ever. ..doesn’t care enough to comb it…proceeds to the door..looks in the peep hole…some girl standing outside. He opens the door
Karthik- yea
Priya- hi, I am pradeep’s friend.
Karthik- oh ho neega priya va…please come.
He looks back at his living room, its cleaned neatly. He thanks pradeep in his mind and tells her to take a seat.
Priya- so ur karthik right?
Karthik- yea..
Priya- pradeep niraya solli irrukan ungala pathi…
Karthik- oh appdiya….(nanga thana solla sonathe)..

After 2 minutes door bell rings again
Karthik- excuse me.
He goes near the door, looks in the peep hole again..his face changes..he runs inside his room..starts banging the washroom door..
Karthik- machan come out…she followed me hear too
Pradeep from inside..yaaru da?
Karthik- dai..andha ponnu da..come out fast and tell her that I am not home.
Pradeep- dai..i am taking shower
Karthik- ponna da nee..oru mani nerama kulikara..chi velila va..
Pradeep rushes out of the washroom..wears his favourite blue jeans and white shirt and goes out.
He sees priya sitting in the living room watching alaipayuthe…he gives her a quick smile and runs to the door and opens it..
Pradeep- sorrynga karthik is not hear.
Megha- huh..yaaru karthik?..err ithu pradeep vidu thana ithu?
Pradeep- yea..that’s me..
Megha- priya inga thana irruka?
Pradeep- oh oh..sorry..neega priya…oh..megha?..come in..
Megha- yea..no probs.. inga parking illaya?..i had to go to the next complex to park my car.
Pradeep- ohh appdiya..
Megha enters the house and sees priya seriously involved in watching the movie.
Megha- hey loose..nan vanthathu kooda theriyama appdi enna padam di parkara..
Priya- vaadi..alaipayuthe…romba naal achi maddy a parthu..hehe

In the mean time pradeep goes inside his room..
Pradeep- dai..athu megha da..priya oda friend..
Karthik- enna?..shit..how am I gonna show my face now..

Pradeep- etho first time maari romba feel panre..paravala va va..

To be continued..:))..

30 comments:

Anonymous said...

hey kavi..guess who?neva told me you have a blog..kedi..
enna konjum real story maari irruku?

kuttichuvaru said...

hmm... kathai enga poguthu nnu paarpom... kadaisila 2 jodi serthu vekka poriyaa?? thozhil eppo maathina?? enakkum onnu pudichu kudu....

logic said...

Highly intersting kavitha..
ethartam as usual..dialogues were lively..able to imagine the scenes frame by frame..good scripting.

Pidari.

Kavitha Jay said...

@anon-hmm..yaaru pa nee??..hints plz:P

@kuttichuvaru-enna da..vara vara un kozhuppu adigama aayiduchi..poi doctor a paaru..cholestrol level eggiri irruka pothu..;)
dai unnakellam ennala ponnu parka mudiyathu...therinje entha ponnayum nan genathala thalla mattain..:P...

@logic-pidari ya...neeyum aa da..hehe..thanks for highly intresting comments:)..enga ramesh ooru k poitana?..

vishy said...

ha ha.. Kavitha.. this one is interesting... ana onnu kadaisila.. namma Tamil padam mari mudikkam different aah end pannunga.. and dont make it like Hydrabad Blues.

ada-paavi!!!! said...

nalla pogathu kadhai, engaiyo ketta madri irukkae :P

Drops of Ocean said...

Hey..cool one! Very interesting...

Has to be me said...

Good going....r u planning to take a movie & is this blog being a trial run?!!!! ;)
U r yet to tell me if this is real incident or not?

Vishnu said...

thats intresting story kandal naal m,udhal oops sorry oartha mudhal nalle...

kaathai nalla irukku, reala illa imangination a....

hopped from Razzzzzzz
Cheers!
:)

nandoo said...

good narration .... innum itthu mathiri ethini part kondu poga pora.. seekraama mudichidu

kuttichuvaru said...

athunaala thaan enna pathi theriyaatha oru ponnu paarthu kattikkanum-nnu nenaikkaren!! ;-)

Kavitha Jay said...

@vishy-haha hydrabad blues..cha cha..avlo kevalama pudikka mattain..

@ada-paavi- engayo ketta maariya??..ohh un life la nee ethini ponnungaloda sandai pottu irruka..lol

@raz-happy ending aa..innum nane ending ezhudhala pa:)....one of my friends is a model in chennai..she got me aarya's email id..:))..anna nan than innum avankku oru mail kooda anupla..
pannam..pathaivi..pasanga..yella namala thedi varanum...enna nan solrathu..:P..

Kavitha Jay said...

@sindhu- thanks sindhu:)

@has to be me- hehe..this is not real pa..if i see a guy like aarya even in the streets..the first thing i would do is post it in my blog...yen vazhkai la appdi la nadakathu n ninaikiren..:P..tamil movie ya..profession ye change pannitiye..lol

@vishnu-dai..kanda nal mudhal ke story writter nan than..lol..imagination than pa...and thanks for dropping by..:))

Kavitha Jay said...

@nandoo-enna da romba nalla aale kannum...entha ponnu pinadi suthittu irrundha?..lol..i have yet to decide how to end this..apparam solren..innum ethini episodes n..:)

@madsies-hehe..adhan ippo eppdi end panrathu n romba confusions of indiaings aa irruku..:P

@kuttichuvaru-ayada..avlo seekaram nee entha poonayum yematha vida mattain....appdina..oru white ponnu a kalyanam panniko..nee avlo thittaradhu kooda puriyathu..lol..

kuttichuvaru said...

echoosme.... white ponnu ellam namma talent-kku romba jaasthi!! yetho namma level-kku yethaachum thaan paarkanum!!

Kirukal said...

Your writing makes the scenes and charecters come alive!!! Nalla drama material!!!

Intrepid traveller's dairy said...

Hey Kavitha...hit ur blog by fluke and I thought the 2 posts on partha mudhal nalle was all real...i guess i fooled myself on this one...but it seemed extremely real...nice post :-)!!

Kavitha Jay said...

@kuttichuvaru- haha..seri un level ena n sollu..appdiya parkiren;)

@raz-hmm..enna pa ippdi solluta..heart break aayidichi..lol..seri arya illa na surya..;)

@imsaimannan- karthik..aahh..adha eppdi sollrathu..hmm...seri..athu vandhu..i met him 4-5yrs ago..saw him and went crazy...avanoda unnoru per madhavan..he acted in alaipayuthe..:P

Kavitha Jay said...

@kirukal-hey..enna pa..romba busy ya...no new post on ur side..thanks da..:))

@random thoughts from chennai to canada- habba..un per eh ivlo perusa irruke:))...where abouts in canada??..nice to c someone from the same place...:)..and thanks for dropping by..keep visiting..

Intrepid traveller's dairy said...

hey kavitha....aama....all of a sudden decided to blog...and intha peru thaan en moola ku vanthathu...lol...so wat do u do in toronto??entha university??UFT??thanks for dropping by my blog :-)....i live close to bramalea city centre...so u can say its the beginning to brampton...and border of toronto...

Anonymous said...

Hey..neatly written...enjoyed reading it...btw..are you doing freelance or something....atleast ananda vikadan la kathyavathu yezhuthariya??...lol...

Keep up your good work...

brute said...

beautiphooolll kavita... :P

ambi said...

Nalla irukku kadha..(first partum padichen) twist ellam next postla kudupeengalaa? he hee...
Hi, ambi,first time here...

Kavitha Jay said...

@random thoughts from chennai to canada-bramalea..thats pretty close to toronto:))...i go to university for Ontario....what about you?

@raz-haha..nammakulla edhukku sandai..seri seri neeye vechikko..lol...parthu jothika thallittu poida pora;)

@vicky- solluva da...cha yen talent aa paratama ippdi sollitiye:P..hehe...

@brute-haha..dank u:)

@ambi-oh aama illa..kadhai na twist koodakanum..hmm..seri seri..nice to meet to meet u ambi..:)))

Vishnu said...

happy ending venuma.....

Pardeepu + Priya...
Karthik +Mega...

ithu normal nama ouru cinema

differenta vennuma...

i've to give work to my grey cells


Cheers!
:)

Anand said...

hi kavitha..chance illa... super interesting:))) can imagine megha's character it reminds one of my friend..:)) cool story..paavam pa pradeep...:)

Nostalgia said...

Eppa oru tamil padam paatha efect irukku. Your narration is truly amazing, you should consider profession change :)

Why does all clicks have to start from a fight??

Kavitha Jay said...

@vishnu-paravala da..konjum unnoda grey cells k valai kuduthu..idea kudu..hehe...anna adhukkula vidinjido n solla varaya?..:P

@anand prabhu- dank u dank u..pradeep yen pa pavum..avanakku than aallu irruke;)..

@nostalgia-haha..fight aa..ethini tamizh padam pa fight la arambichi irrukku?..pluz intha maari nee shopping po mothu oru ponnu unoda sandai potta....u will remember her face for long time..adhukku than..:P..

Nostalgia said...

adhu seri, Walmart le arambhikure love endha padathallyum varavillai.Invariably every college based love story starts with a fight.

Anyway eargly awaiting the next part.

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