I looked outside the window
Hoping to find something; incredible and astonishing.
Like a small ray of hope!!
Thinking if it could change my destiny forever
Thinking if you will be still standing outside my window
Thinking of the sweet and cherishful days that passed by,
I do not know what destiny holds for me
But I know now that I am nothing without you.
Tears came rolling down my cheek as I stood there across your graveyard.
Soon did I realize that destiny and me don’t go hand in hand...
There are no words to describe for the love that I shared with you.
The love that is so real; that I want to feel it without any pain when we apart.
Hi guys how u all doing, I started to write this poem from a bright side but I do not know how and when I changed it to something depressing. I guess I am more comfortable writing sad and gloomy poems than lively and colorful ones...
27 comments:
Enne kavs...ore condracting post a irukku from ur prev one...
u know what? ur lively n colorful posts r the ones most of us like i guess... sad la eppovaachum podu...ogay?
Quoting Vito corleone
"Every man has but one destiny"
@dakalti-hmmm...seri da nee sollita illa...no more depressing and sad stuff...:)..
@ganesh-yea..very true...u believe in fate?
Nalla Irukku...Seriously Gud!
I guess I am more comfortable writing sad and gloomy poems
Azhu moonjiya nee??
Anyway, who is this "you" here??
>>>I guess I am more comfortable writing sad and gloomy poems than lively and colorful ones...
welcome to the club... naanum appadi dhan...
Alo :) Yenna sogathin uruvam???
I dont wanna c any1 sad ;) Athuvum yen frends'na... "NO"
Cheers...
:)
Mystery engayo poita po...
roomba soogama iruku..
kavitha... it happens, ur destiny made u end this poem depressing :P
enna profile la poo va mathitta...
bt from which site did u get this template??
The Feel of the poem is too good. Sadness can be felt more than happiness, by others.
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kavi yemma yennu ketkaren...andha $20 boy romba trouble panraano...ennamo po nalla irundha sari...ok andha payan enga irukaanu sollu unakaaga naan avan kitta pesaren appuram neksht post cheerfull ah podalaam :-)
good you wrote
@vicky-hi da..aamma nan romba periya azhu moonji:P.."you" is you;)
@vishy-ohh neeyum aa..super:)
@ponnarasi-hehe..chumma konjum different aa irraklame n than..
@logic-danks da
@brute-haha..vah vah
@vishy-hmm..i am not sure..i just searched from google..
@shiva-yea very true..thanks for dropping by..:)
@syam-payam aa..adhu yaaru...anga yarachum irrundha solli anuppu:P
@known stranger-thanks vaishnav:)
"you" is you
Nenja nakkita po ;-)
Ennama aachchu unakku???Nalla thaane irunda....
would u mind placing my blog's link in urs?
I already placed urs...
@vicky-hehe..i am very good at that;)
@harish-nalla than da irrukken..chumma oru change k
@shiv-sure not a problem..but i guess i am having some problem with blogrolling...so i am unable to add you...
yo..... attagaasamaana template!!
Hey kavitha..poem looks good..dropped here thru someother blog..keep rocking!!!
Nice...you have great images here...
beautiful poem...
ur imaginaton is just wonderful...
Sogamaa irundhaalum Gud poem.
@kutti- hi da...wow finally u get time to visit my page:P
@karthik-hey..thanks a bunch..keep visting
@kuan gung-thanks buddy:)
@shruti- i like ur name;)..reminds me of my grade 1 friend:)..thanks a lot..
@ram-hi ram..thanks pa
It's very nice poem. I guess you belong to that special club which celebrates the sorrows of life :) I do the same. After all, as Shelley said, our greatest joys are in our deepest sorrows :). But if I am allowed to speculate is this all about some broken relationship ? I went through one recently and wrote similar stuff..hence this senseless urge to poke my nose :)
Hey... was just passing by - this is a good one... i guess straight from the heart and so the sadness - but keep moving towards the sunrays :-)
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