Monday, October 22, 2007

Flames of love

I saw her when my life was in destruction
Her shawl touched my skin with the help of the breeze
I felt something inside my body,
Feelings unknown, alien kind…
She threw a disgusted look, I did not know why?
Moments passed…
I figured it was my cigar that I was breathing in between my lips.
I waited for her the next day but she disappointed me
Dejected I lighted a cigarette and was about to put in my mouth when she walked by
I hurriedly threw the smoke away but it wasn’t quick enough
Unfortunately she got a glimpse of it.
She smiled unknowingly and walked away
I stood there feeling contended and enchanted.

19 comments:

Raj said...

meiyaalamaavey nee ippolaam online vardhu illai! :P

nyaayamaa paatha indha matterlaam engalamaadhiri guys ezhudha vendiyadhu!...indha post yaaroda inspiration or yaarukkaaga ezhudhapattadhu?! :)

HaRi pRaSaD said...

Ohw! So you smoke is it?

:)

Raja Krishnan said...

Love smoke.......? Scene.... I guess the girl is from police dept so only when u smoke she comes....

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Cigar,cigarette,smoke.konjam sodappalaga irukke..sariyana bloggukku than vandhu irukkena..!Yosichuuttu vaaren..enna sariya ma!
TC
CU

brute said...

i gt a doubt kavi, tu ladkha hai ya ladkiii??????? eh??? :D

dakaltiz said...

mmm... enne ma...ore crush, love @ first sight nu kadha poitruku... ithellam thaaana varutha? ille inspiration a?;)

Sacrificing little things makes a lot a difference in life la? :)

pradeepkumar said...

:) ....Very good :).... Love flames suits the content nicely :)

Vinesh said...

she doused a flame to light another! :-)

pradeepkumar said...

@Vinesh..awesome :)
@Mystery...very cute of you to say whatever you said on my post :).

Subramanian Ramachandran said...

so ur friend does these things on seeing u??

dont think it as a respect for u... he fears if u will join for company :p

Kavitha Jay said...

@raj-nan online varadhathukkum ithukkum enna samatham??? :P

"nyaayamaa paatha indha matterlaam engalamaadhiri guys ezhudha vendiyadhu"
hehe...yea guys la intha maari post poda maataingaraangale..athan we have to take initiative..
actually i did get inspired by someone n wrote this..:D

@hari-lol..good question..ithukku kandippa ans pannanuma..;)

Kavitha Jay said...

@rajkingme-arrrghhh...mokkai podarathukku oru alavu irrukku..lol

@CU-hahaha..wait wait..correct aana blog than..:D come back...lol ;)

@brute-grrrr...ladka bolungi to kya karega? ;)
tujhe achanak aise sawaal kyoon sujhne lage hai?

Kavitha Jay said...

@dakaltiz-intha maari kelvi la nee kekkalama?
i did get inspired by someone da..:D

@pradeepkumar-thank u thank u :)

@vinesh-ahaaa...super..:D

@rsubras- LOL
kadavle..kaapathu..wat if i already smoke?? :P

prithz said...

Ore romantic post ah poothu thaakaringa! nice nice :)

Well, like dakaltiz said, sometimes, it feels so wonderful to jus give up something for someone u love.. :)

cm chap said...

Now I have no doubt something cooking up.... BTW.. why ur nt online these days?

The Furobiker said...

cool

Subramanian Ramachandran said...

There is no smoke without Flame kavi...so mariyathaiya accept :p

Unknown said...

Hmmm... innamo nadakudhu... marmama irukudhu! :D

Known Stranger said...

yevan avan una parthu smoke panrtha vidran. will tell him not to do that kind of mistakes in life.