Monday, November 19, 2007

Stranger

My day was incomplete, something was bothering me. I threw away all my anger and discomfort and started walking as the cold wind was blowing across my face. My face turned pale and my lips were dry. My eyes were becoming watery; I couldn’t see what was coming in front of me. Suddenly I stepped on something big, tripped and fell over my knees. Ouch came out my husking voice. I was trying to get up but something stopped me down. My foot was sprained.

As I was trying to make an attempt to get up someone held my shoulders and helped me stand up. I looked into his eyes first, something very familiar. I glared back at his face and said thank you. He smiled and gave a no problem reply and walked by. I tried to make one more step ahead as my knees were shaking and I was about to fall one more time over my face when he grabbed my hand swiftly and walked me back to my house.
We didn’t talk anything while walking together. The way he held my arms and hand made me uncomfortable. Uncomfortable in a sense no one has ever held me in a more caring and compassionate way.
I opened my apartment door and he slowly made way into the room …made me sit on my couch. I was still unable to talk anything. He looked around my room and said nice paintings. “Thanks” I said. I wanted to offer him something to eat but if I try to get up this time I would fall on my hard concrete and nothing would be more embarrassing than that. I just sat there looking at him, his hair, his eyes, and his smile with those dimples. Who is he, my mind wandered?
He looked at me one more time and grabbed the phone from my table and placed it my hands. He looked around again and said “so shall I make my way?”
I wanted to yell out loud and say “please stay for some more time”. Can’t you see in my eyes that I am lonely? All alone in this unknown land, by the time I looked up to see him he was gone. I wouldn’t dare get up to catch him so I just lay in my couch thinking about this stranger who had brought some light in my dark life, only wishing to see him again.



Today, give a stranger one of your smiles. It might be the only sunshine he/she sees all day.


7 comments:

Raj said...

Idhu kadhaiya, nijama?! :) If it was a true incident, you have penned it in a very nice manner, taking care to write about even the finest emotions! If it was a fiction, you have thought out the incident very well! :)

Kavitha Jay said...

@raj-i wish a handsome guy picked me up when i fell...hehe...
it is a fiction...actually i wrote this whole thing in 15 min..:)
just came in my mind and started typing :D

Raz said...

v sweet di! :)
machi... 15 minz la eluthuniya?
yekkam veli pattu iruka?

super!

btw, raj.. romba work sonne.. ella blog laiyum first a comment pannre?

vetti payale... puthu post podu..

chandru a comment panna sollu en blog la

Ponnarasi Kothandaraman said...

Adadaaaaaaaaa! Kannnnnnu! :D Un kita thaniya pesikren.. Pesanumey! :P

Sudha said...

Oh !!! i thought it was true.nice imagination.Chennaila yar inda madiri ellamm pannuvanga!!!I was joking, that is possible.

" wish a handsome guy picked me up when i fell...hehe...
it is a fiction...actually i wrote this whole thing in 15 min..:)
just came in my mind and started typing :D"

-May you get a good boy friend my wishes!!!

Compassion Unlimitted said...

For a moment I was confused if you were picking up the puppy and talking about the incident (mistake was I saw the pic first )
Later I realised..lol

Great work ma (Ponnarasi kitte sollarache namma kitteyum sollidunga ,sariya ! )
TC
CU

Dreamzz said...

Nice fiction work! keep rocking