All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
I am Prakash, also known as Jeeva by my family and close friends. I am originally from Madurai, our family moved to Chennai when I was three. So, basically Chennai is everything for me. It holds a lot of precious memories in my life from school till my college days. I did my engineering in Anna University and got selected for a high paying job right away. Now I am an employee working and living alone for 2 years. My parents moved back to Madurai to live with their parents and I visit them every month if my work permits to take a 3 day leave.
So that ties almost everything about my background and my life. But I didn’t start this story to talk about myself. I wanted to talk about my present life. Something that knocked me unexpectedly with a sudden shock…with a sudden surprise.
Her name is Geeta, Geeta Prakash. Just by saying my name after hers makes me smile to myself with a heart full of satisfaction. She walked into my life when I was about to leave to UK for 2 years, officially of course. I had gone to the shopping center to take a passport size photo and while coming back I accidentally bumped into her and broke her beautiful clay pot that she was carrying in her hand.
I looked at her and I didn’t realize that I was looking at her face instead of apologizing to her, at that moment I felt something in my heart. No wait in my stomach. You won’t understand it’s a very different kind of feeling, a feeling that I have never experienced before.
Something you would feel if you were to come down from a roller coaster. I knew right away that she was the one; I looked at the dismay on her face when she bent down to pick the broken pieces. I must have said sorry at least a thousand times that she broke into laughter uttering “that’s ok”. In the mean time her friend came running noticing the situation and picked her things and left the place giving me a dirty look.
I kept staring at both of them until they disappeared into the crowd. Who would have thought that this girl will devastate my sleep and appetite? I thought that love was a waste of time, but after I saw her I had to change my mind. I couldn’t sleep in the night; every time I close my eyes I think about her or dream about her. The clock just ticked away and in no time it was morning. Has this ever happened to you guys?
My next concern was to find out who she was and where she lived. Well being an Alaipayuthe fan I had some hope that I will find her somewhere. To my luck I saw her again in one of the restaurants that I regularly visit, sitting with her same friend who I saw that day. I approached her and said “I want to marry you”. Her friend looked at me with a big question mark while Geeta just stared at the open space not knowing what I was talking about. Her friend got up from her seat and told me to leave the place. I went close to Geeta held her hands and said, I am not going to force you and you don’t have to love me back. You must be thinking “who is this crazy guy jumping out of knowhere asking for my hand”….I just told you what I feel. I know it’s very hard for you to decide now, but I can wait. I placed my visiting card in her table and left.
Two weeks later, I got a call from her friend saying she wants to talk to me about Geeta and her family. We both agreed to meet in a common place and chatted for couple of hours. She seemed satisfied with my answers and expectation out of our relation. Next thing in my list was to meet geeta’s parents, with no further delay I visited them and took their permission too.
Now everything was set other than geeta’s own approval. I wanted to see her but my stupid gut made me stop . I called her that night and proposed my love again; she said she wanted some time to think. That one day was like hell for me. I couldn’t concentrate in anything.
She called me the next day and said agreed for our marriage. I had no words to express over the phone so I just ran to her house and hugged her tight.
Our marriage took place after 2 months and my life was complete.
6 months have passed by and today is a big day for me and Geeta. All these days she has seen the world through my eyes. After this eye surgery her world will be filled with colors. She doesn’t have to imagine my face anymore. I am eagerly waiting to see the happiness in her eyes when she sees her parents.
Beauty won’t be a mystery to her after this.
The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt within the heart.
-Helen Keller
Monday, February 11, 2008
Love Knows No Boundaries
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aiaaa me first me first.........
love at first sight huh? :) v sweet... di.
right the feeling is never in ur heart.. its in ur stomach.. :D
Excellent!
i wish i have the same luck!! :)
nice and sweet!
@raz-love at first sight than :)...romba experience aana maari pesittu irrukka..;)
@the maverick blog-hey..thanks a lot :)
@goopi-ellarukkum intha adhishtam kedichiduma?? btw that was sweet of u to say that :)
@dreamzz- thank u :D
haha..it's interesting how i took a TOTALLY different avenue on the same topic on my latest story! :D
Kavi..when I have a successful relationship..or when a guy confesses his 'love' for me...I guarantee you that...I will write a story that has a happy ending! :D
I think that the stories that I write (or attempt to write) kind of reflect SOME of my feelings as well....! Well..I should say that I can relate to some of the emotions that are reflected in them! :D
as usual a really cute love story!this time bordering valentine's day!
As always,neat narration!
Rock on!! B-)
Make you CRY?? oh no!! That was never an intention! I had to put my frustration and desperation in words... didn't have any other purpose in mind!! :D
Ah..Valentine's Day is coming up...I might write the saddest story in the whole universe!!
Hahahahaha....if I ever have a decent guy..I think I'll keep writing..just so to inspire others and encourage them!! You know, maybe push the point that 'There's someone for everyone' deal!!!
Neenga engayo poiteengae!
Hmmm... Nanum than passport photo eduke poren... nanum than hotelku ellam poren... engae...ithule inthe vena pone Valentines day vera vanthu ore mood off panuthu. Evan da ithelam kandupidichathu... ore tension pa.
hi,
rarely we come across this type of sweet successful, love stories.It was a complete story with a good happy ending which I liked the most.
anbudan aruna
nice story, gud twist in the end
wow kavitha! you are excellent!! eppadi pa??
so lovely!
i wish i cud write like that!! :)
u made me day!
Cheers!
@CVR-thanks for those corrections...:)..
@hari-kavala padatha nanba...unnakum oru naal varum..hehe....so valentines day k enna special ;)
Enaku Prakash character romba pidichu iruku .... he lives by the famous saying - "Kozhi kuruda , sevidangrathu mukkiyam illai ... kozhambu rusiya iruntha podhum ... , I like him .. :)
intha love @ first sight ellam summa ... mela sonne pala mozhithan ulaha podhumarai :D :)
@aruna-hey aruna...welcome :)
thanks a lot...
@ram-thanks ram :D
@anonme-oye enna nakkal ahh...unnakku enna korachal..u can write way better than me...i have seen ur posts...:D
I agree! Love has no boundries.
@prasad-yen da ippdi thappu thappa yosikkara ;)
@kulpreet-yea...thanks for dropping by :)
@Kavi: >> @prasad-yen da ippdi thappu thappa yosikkara ;)
voi... naaan enna thapu thappa yosikiren ... this is my perspective to the so called "love" @ first sight :D :)
Good one.. But I'm not in favor of Love at first sight.
excellent narration ... enjoyed reading it..
:P .. keep writing
I completely agree with prasad. :)
kathai inum padikala..aana unga post headerla potrukura line paathey semma impressed...sky isnt the limit..footsteps on moon!!! nachunu iruku..appalika kathaiyapadichitu commentaren
~gils
superapu ammini.. arumai arumai.. had a smile at reading the cute post... but had a sound laugh at prasads comments.. sorry nanum athae thaan comment adichen...
Kuttibalu, karthik .. ungaloda dhil'lana comment enaku evalo pudichu irukuna ., ennoda beerla ungalu oru share kudukra alavuku'nu naaan solluven :D
(sun'tv neengal ketta paadal impact)
@Kavi.. love@firstsight, sight@lovefirst ellam lululaaaii...
hi
Although I dont agree with Love at first sight...I did enjoy reading it....wonderfully written...keep it coming...
tc
Akash
A Known stranger
Kahani mein twist! Its beautiful.
@cm-chap-well i am in favor too..just a thought..n just a story :)
@aravind-hey Welcome..thanks a lot :)
@BSK-neeyuma??? lol
@gils- thank u :D...padichittu comments sollunga..
@kuttibalu-grrrr...unga ellarkum enna achi...avannku support panreenga...cha cha..
@prasad- no comments lol
@akash-hehe...same here...thank u :D
@solitaire-haan...:)..thank u
Neat story. Well writen.
really nice a post!
Xlnt narration......kudos Kavi!!
keep rocking !!!
My Honest opinion about the story..
Initial Narration and the end have a disconnect...But a good one indeed..!
Another point to be mentioned/questioned is that why does love at first sight in movies/stories always have to be a chemical reaction in the stomach??!!
Keep it up..!!
good one mystery..read it twice...flow impresses me much...
long time since i droped in here
Have actually stopped blogging... Came back to see if my page existed... Saw your comment... Read this blog amid a busy day's work... You made me feel that I should fall in love soon...
Think this would get me to start writing again.
Lucid writing. BTB did you just make up that one? or was it a true story?
Voww...amazing....touched my heart..congrats to her she will be able to see this world!
mmmm !! and they lived happily ever after.
my imagination acted out every line of your wonderful dialogue.
'HAPPY DAYS'
sweet narration and very sweet story. Good One..
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