Thursday, February 16, 2006

Tangled-PART I

Raghu, Maya and Pradeep- best friends
Pooja- maya’s close friend
Sanjay- Pradeeps close friend
Similarities- same university.
Differences- Maya is doing biological science while Raghu and Pradeep are in manufacturing engineering. Maya was from a typical south Indian Tamil family. Raghu North Indian from Delhi and Pradeep from Kerela.

Three of them sitting in the school cafeteria
Raghu- I am gonna miss you guys pa, I really don’t want to graduate.
Pradeep- come on da machan, this is part of life too, don’t worry we all will be the same even after 10 years. What do you say maya?
Maya- hmm, I don’t know da..feel pathetic. I don’t know how I am going to be without you guys. All these four years living in the same hostel, eating from one another’s plate, making fun of each other, studying together….really going to miss all that.
Pradeep- hey… Maya look at me.
He places his hand on top of her hand and gives the sweetest smile.
Raghu gets up suddenly
Maya
- hey where you off too..
Raghu- huh..have a project to submit, you guys carry on.

After 2-3 hours
Pooja- Maya, why you look so dull and dead.
Maya- only three more weeks di, then all of us in different directions. Hate this feeling.
Pooja- I know what you mean pa, don’t worry. Time will heal everything.
Maya- hmmmmm
Pooja- can I ask you something
Maya- what is it
Pooja- do you by any chance have feelings for Pradeep.
Maya- huh….n..no(stumbles)
Pooja- hmm, okay…nice try..haha
Maya- why, do you think he likes me?
Pooja- as far I know, I have a feeling he does. Why don’t you ask him.
Maya- no no, what if he doesn’t think of me in that way.
Pooja- hey, Pradeep shares everything with Raghu. So Raghu should know something if there is anything like that. Why don’t you try asking him.
Maya- hmm..but I don’t want Raghu going and telling Pradeep that I asked these kind of dumb questions.
Pooja- don’t you worry, you know Raghu more than me, he is gem of a person…he wont open his mouth..trust me!!
Maya- ahh…hmm..yea..

At the same time Pradeep and Sanjay have a conversation
Sanjay- machan, when you gonna tell her
Pradeep- tell what..who
Sanjay- nice joke of the year, come on da
Pradeep- yea, I have to let her know someday, just that I am not used to asking these kind of questions to gurls.
Sanjay- what are you trying to say here…you think I go around asking out gurls everyday.
Pradeep-lol.i didn’t mean in that way da..
Sanjay- whatever way you meant…just go tell her.
Pradeep- hmm…NO..i will wait a bit da…don’t want to rush things. I have to find out if she has anyone in her mind first.


.....to be cont....

13 comments:

Ramesh said...

nalla interesting-aa pogum podhu ipdi kavuthu, next meet panraen -nnu sollitiyae.. good waiting for the next part.

kuttichuvaru said...

hmm.... ennamo nadakkuthu inga ;-)

Drops of Ocean said...

Good one! Waiting for the follow up. Btw, how come Raghu and Pradeep use Tamil words like "Machan"? Just wondering...:)

brute said...

interesting one

Kirukal said...

Interesting! Waiting for the next part!!!!

neighbour said...

ennamaa idhu unga peru maathiriyea "Mysterya irukudhu"..

Kadaiseela yedhaavadhu kavutheenga.. nadakaradha vera....

But characterization is good.. As of now Raghu thaan paavam... enna paana poraaanoo.. avanooda feeling ennavoo...

Kaahdal desam maathri kadhaiyaa kondu poiyaraadheengamaaa...

Awaiting for next release!!!

dakaltiz said...

Enne kavi..love triangle ah? ...kadha sooper ra pogum pola...

sari ore guess.... Pradeep ...Pooja ku line podraano?? Raghu .. Maya mela feelings oh??... ;)
Intresting...

waitin for the next part..

logic said...
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logic said...

mystery plot roomba thrillinga iruku..

dai dakalti killadi da ni..correcta sollita..

Mystery enga dakalti roomba buthisalli avana yarum emmatha mudiyaha aha ahaaa ahhaaaaa

dakaltiz said...

kavi..romba naala kekanum nu irunthean...Y u hav miss spelt mystery(Msytery) in your title?? ... n e significance??
It looks correct where it says "posted by mystery"
??

Kavitha Jay said...

@ramesh- hehe,wait pannu..:)

@ricky-thanks

@kuttichuvaru-enna da naddakkuthu..??..lol

@sindhu-ok..since pradeep is malayali...i have seen lot of mallu ppl use those words..so i just added it..and we can say that raghu doesnt understand.lol..:))

@brute- thanks for visiting..:)

@kirukal- thanks pa

@nannu- thanks da...haha..even i hate the cont part..chumma ore build up k than potten..lol

@neigh-kadhal desam maari aaaa.....hehe..

@dakaltiz-nalla guess...dai nee ivlo yezhdhi...nan yen story oda plot e marandhu poiten...oh..yea..typo mistake pa..i didnt even notice it..:)...perra marthi potta enna pa significance irrukkum??..lol...

@logic- aiyo..dakalti ne avlo buthusaali aa...logic konjum over a build up kudakre maari illa?..hehe...mystery oda mystrey plot..:))

imsaimannan-wait and seee :)...real story illa pa..chumma imagination than...

ashok said...

mystery...comeon.post the rest...

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