Saturday, February 18, 2006

Tangled-PART II and final..

Next day

Maya-HI, Raghu…
Raghu- hey, whats up…
Maya- hmm..are you busy?
Raghu- No, not at all..whats the matter?
Maya(thinking to herself)- aiyo..eppdi start pannuven..
Raghu-hey, what happened yaar
Maya- huh, I like someone..
Raghu- WHO?
Maya-I will tell you…but first I want to know if he thinks of me in the same way..
Raghu- hey hey..who is it?..atleast give me some hints…is he from our university?
Maya- yess
Raghu- hmm…what program?
Maya- Manufacturing engineering
Raghu- ohhhh..okk..and I know you only like Indian guys..so that comes to around 12 guys in our class
Maya- hehe…
Raghu- TELL, I am going crazy here..
Maya- ok, big hint he is a Scorpio.
Raghu(thinking to himself)- holy….is that me…she likes me??..i cant believe it…
Maya- oye, where you lost..
Raghu- so... how old is he?…5 days older than you..
Maya- what?
Raghu- I meant ..huhh..err…5 days, 1 yr ..2 yr older than you..
Maya- I don’t know
Raghu – hmm…ok
Maya(thinking to herself)- wait wait…why did he say 5 days….my birthday is on November 4th and Raghu’s on October 29th ….Pradeeps on November 11th but he is one year older than me…soooo the only person who is 5 days older to me is Raghu….OH GOD…did I hint him something wrong…
Raghu- Maya..actually I like someone too..
Maya- errr…who?
Raghu- she is in Biological science..
Maya(thinking to herself)- aiyo…whats this new confusion
Raghu- And I know her from 1st year.
Maya- hmm…Indian??
Raghu- ofcourse!!!!
Maya- ok..so there are 4 indian girls in my class….Shalini…Shilpa…Warida and Navjeet..who is it?
Raghu(thinking to himself)- this girl man…she left her name..and she expects me to tell who it is…
Maya(thinking to herself)- I am the only person..he knows from first year…
Raghu- soo…did you figure it out..or you want me to say her name..
Maya- err..huh..Raghu..i have class now…I will call you tonite…
Raghu- sure yaar..no worries…so when are you going to tell who that guy is..
Maya- oh that..forget about it for now. catch you later…byee
Raghu- hmm..bye!!

After few minutes Pooja and Maya have a conversation


Pooja- hey, did you ask him?
Maya- don’t even start..it was all your idea..grrr, now everything is messed up
Pooja- hey..what happened??(eagerly)
Maya-I think Raghu likes me…he didn’t say directly..but its very obvious
Pooja- are you serious??…what did you tell him
Maya- I don’t know man…should I just leave it like that..
Pooja- what do u mean leave it…are you stupid…
Maya- I am serious…
Pooja- hmm..i heard from Sanjay that Pradeep likes someone too…
Maya- Really…ah man
Pooja- hmm..what you gonna do
Maya- I am not going to bring this topic again to raghu or pradeep…imagine how Raghu would feel if he came to know that all this while I was giving hints about Pradeep not him. And coming to Pradeep..i really don’t want to know who he likes….its better to be friends than putting our relationship in all these tangles.. Many people will walk in and out of your life but only true friends will leave footprints in your heart..


FrIeNdShIp Is JuSt A wOrD bUt My FrIeNdS gIvE iT a MeAnInG..

17 comments:

Ramesh said...

ennoda blog-a konjum twist panna madhiri irukku.. but yes. i agree with what you say. good post and narrated well.. own story-a??

logic said...

hello..intha madhri ellarom nenachita..pulla kutyallam eppo porakarathu..eppadi konjarathu...

In india evry 10 mins a baby is born..dont u guys(raghu,pooja,sanjay,maya et al.)want to maintain this up..

ithallam konjam overa illaa..

ammma enga buthisalli dakalitya kanumayy..

common common quick quick..dakalti..unathu commentu kaga kathorukum logikay emathathey..

neighbour said...

Yeammma ... avunga moonu perum lifela romba kaalam appadiyae irundhiurpaangu nenaikarrengaa..

I dont think so...

I think of two option when these 3 meet in future..

1) ada sollama poiyutaamenu moonu perum romba kastaparupaanga
2) AS a matter of time they will discuss abt this.

kadhalaa manasukulla vachukita nanbargala romba kaalam iruka mudiyaadhu ammuni... enna naan sollaradhu..

Kavitha Jay said...

@ramesh-thanks ramesh...own story..but made some changes...only 70% is true from this..:))

@logic- haha..eppdi yellarum yosikka matanga pa..but there are certain people who respect friendship more than love.enna nan solradhu??

@neigh- yea..what you said was very true...at some point of there life they will get the feeling....but lets just say pradeep and maya get together...imagine how raghu would feel?...if maya and pradeep were raghu's true friends they wouldnt be able to see another friend sad...so on total all the 3 would be unhappy...idhu thevaya...??

Drops of Ocean said...

Bang on target! Good ending. And which 70% is true? :))

dakaltiz said...

Mystery...mm..ending was a twist..I too second neigh nanba...well if they are true friends they wud accept this & still continue their relationship..
Moreover..Since maya has started this..Itz gonna linger in their minds still thinking abt each other but w/out tellin any body..Approm konjam indifferent ta thaan avu nga fiendship irunthirukum..
mmm n e comments? ;)

Kavitha Jay said...

@ricky-hmm.."Friendship is the beginning of love, and love is what makes friendship last forever"...well said but this is a different kind of love..lol..

@sindhu-thanks:)..except for the names..most of it is true..;P

@The Masquer-how can one be happy..by hurting their friends feelings?? but what you said was true:))...(confused)..lol

@dakaltiz- yellaram ippdi pottu kozhopreega le...friendship konjum different a than irrukum aanna..once they graduate..and move along...time can heal it right???...

Kirukal said...

I like your ending but ithu kathaiku thaan suit aagum..neja lifela romba romba kashtam! Mansa puzhunju edithudum......

ashok said...

hmm..really good narration...enjoyed reading ur 70%experience....

brute said...

googly..!!

kuttichuvaru said...

nice one..... short n sweet aa irunthuthu.... but, yaaravathu tamil cinema director a approach pannunga... intha kathaiya eppdi masala serthu, nadula thevai illaama oru villain, family sentiment vechu, kuthu song pottu 2 n half hrs aakkarathu nnu plan pannalaam.....

Kavitha Jay said...

@nannu- haha..untangled aa..yezhuditta pochi..:))

@kirukal- very true pa...yenna panradhu...

@ammu-haha..namma tamil makkal k ippovum happy ending than piddikkum illa...lol..anna nee sonadhu romba correct pa..hmm..

@ashok- sank ya(appdina thank you.yen baashai la..:)

@brute- haha..:))...

@kuttichuvaru- thanks da..tamil cinema director yeddukku pa..adhan neeye irrukiye..indha maari vella la neeye panna maata ..hehe..

@imsaimannan- i understand where your going at...but real life la romba kashtham pa...and sure..will make maya think again about this..:)...70% concept aa..:))..yenna pa theriyanum??..hehe

ashok said...

M, Iam used to "sank u"...thats how the egyptian staff in my company "sank" everybody !!!

kaushik said...

hey:
nice story!
the ending was a googly, but again, it will not be possible to put a full stop to the whole thing and remain friends at the same time. it will surface again at sometime....
and i dont really believe in frnds and understanding, and true frnd will understand type of logic....
there may be exceptions, but when you really like some-one, and she does not like you, it is kinda hard to keep the frndshp going!

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