Suddenly Deepika’s mom broke the silence and said our Deepika is a graduate from Stella Mari’s, she took biotechnology.
Oh that’s nice uttered my mom from behind.
I was just sitting there sipping my coffee admiring Deepika and her restless actions. Her curly hair falling in front of her eyes and the cute dimples just added extra charm to her beauty.
How can I tell everyone that I wanted to talk to her alone?
I got up from my chair and went to the kitchen to keep my cup thinking she would come and take it from me. But NO, her aunt had to come in between to ruin my plan. So, I thought of a better plan this time, I walked outside to the garden and stood there pretending to look at the different types of plants and flowers, not that I know any. It just made me look more stupid so I decided to go sit in one of the chairs near me. I pulled another chair closer hoping she would come join me soon. I waited and waited, I was losing my patience as every minute passed. I was about to get up when my sister came running and said Deepika is upstairs in her room she wants to talk to you.
I was a bit nervous, I didn’t know why? No I wasn’t scared…just a little bit maybe.
She was in her room rearranging her clothes, I walked in. oops I forgot to knock…I went back a couple of steps and knocked…
Deepika-Hey come on in...sorry my room is a bit messy.
Me- oh that’s fine, not worse than mine.
Deepika-urghh have a seat
Me- yea thanks, you know Deepika I want to come back to India.
Before I could say anything further
Deepika- Please Do not mistake me to be one of those shyly smiling, drawing kolams with toe, avid arranged marriage proponent types. I have my own choice in making certain decisions and if I don’t like you I will just say it to your face.
Me-woah..cool down, I am not going to force you to like me.
I could sense the stress in her face go down a bit
Deepika- hmm I am sorry to talk like that, but I didn’t want my life to be like my mom’s. Only I know how painful it is to be without a dad.
Me- yea I totally understand. No compulsion. (gosh she is tuff)
Deepika- so where were you in “America”?
Me-i lived in Connecticut, but I have gone to other places for my official trip.
She didn’t show any sign of interest, I don’t think she cared.
Deepika-oh that’s nice, are you planning to come back?
Me-that’s what I was trying to tell you before, guess you were lost in your own thoughts.
But yes I am thinking about coming back. I am sick and tired of eating fast food. Maybe you can help me out by cooking for me (and I winked)
Deepika- haha, I can hardly hold the ladle straight.
Me-oh wow,,ugh that’s impressive…I don’t blame you, being a biotechnologist must be a demanding job.
Deepika- hmm
Me- (I don’t think she could find anything wrong with what I said, guess that annoyed her a bit)
And before I could respond, the gang returned and my mom surveyed us closely. She seemed satisfied with what she perceived.
Me-well Deepika it was nice talking to you, take your time and you do know my answer. Its not going to change for a while now.
Deepika-yea, I will call you sometime
A firm handshake and a gentle nod and I was gone.
My mind was changing dramatically with every passing minute. I was waiting for her call eagerly anticipating those long lasting several hours with her.
Finally the call came after 2 weeks. I was angry and thrilled at once.
Me-DEEPIKA I gushed into the receiver just like my dad.
Deepika- Sorry, I couldn’t call earlier..something came up
Me-Huh.(what a lame excuse)
Yea yea I am sure, so everyone in your family doing OK?
And so on and so forth our conversation went on, not that long, just short for couple of hours.
Me-So Deepika tell me what do you think about me?
(I really couldn’t wait any longer)
Deepika-I already said yes to your mom.
Me-Oh so your planning to marry her?
Deepika-Haha..oh shut up…"You know, Mr.America. This just will not do. Before we get married, we need to establish some ground rules of conduct that we will adhere to and……."
Me-I take it, so that’s a yes?
Deepika- You bet , Mister. It is a yes. But I will not have you think that I am just your mushy, little Indian girl who was swept off her feet by an NRI.
Me-haha, I am soo in love with you
25 comments:
Kavi... Good.. But why the hell ur so happy n making S/W engrs a funny object...
hey buddy,
Good thinking and simulation of the situation...
Had a nice time when i read the conversations and dreamed that i was between me and deepika ;-P
naan koodathan NRi... intha mari ethuvume nadakka matenguthue en lifela :( cha...
Tats really nice...keep rocking... :)
Good one ........ So you are a great short story writer!!!!!!!!!! cool.. really nice story to read..... i have read lots of friends' blogs with huge stories...i used to skip paragraphs, but here i enjoyed all lines...... good sequencing.....
@cm-chap- thanks :)..hehe unnakku enna da achi?romba feelings oda pesura..S/W engineers k yaarum mariyadha kuduka maataingarangala? ;)
@thenraj-hey..glad u liked it..
haha thats cute..so who is ur deepika???? :P
@prasad-vena da..kovatha kelaratha..lol..
@praveen- hey..thanks a lot..:)
@rajkingme- wow..feel special now..
thanks :D
hey...sooper one.... nice and natural flow :) i shud u just kept the readers guessing till the last like Deepika did to ur Me :)
one thing udhaikkuthu...., what is that, that Deepika found interest in the ME?
btw, is any chance this is ur own experience :p
@rsubras- hmm..yea i thought of doing that..but nadoola yezhudhra mood poichichi..:)..
next time konjum suspense vekkiren..:D
own experience ahh..ada paavi..ennakku ivlo seekaram kalyanam vedam...avasarame illa..let him take his own sweet time to find me..
nadakum mothu kanddipa update panren..:P
di... :) ithu ennamoo ennaku saninu padalaiye
hey u mistook my comment bcoz of a spelling mistake
i said
>>i shud say u just kept the readers guessing till the last like Deepika did to ur Me :)
oggay oggya...... best of luck :)
Good one Kavitha! I imagined every single scene of your short film :)
@raz-hehe..nee ennaaikku than ozhunga yosichi irrukka..lol...
ennamo po..;)
@rsubras-ohhh..wokay wokay..got it..:)
@hari- thanks pa..glad u liked it..
Hi, First time on your blog.
Nice writing. Enjoyed every single line. Short but Sweet.:)
Beautifully written Kavitha! From what I read about s/w engineers and their bride search (I said bride search because from what I read, it was the plight of only the male s/w engineers), your short-story is a real silver-lining! :D
That apart, how did you ever stumble upon my blog?! Thanks for stopping-by at my blog. I have left a reply to your comment and would like to hear from you for that! :)
appo appo vanthu thala kaamichitu po:)
too good... :)
Nice... intha cinemala than s/w engg geli panna neengaluma?? :D
nice writing! :)
nice blog u've got here! :)
btw is that u standing with someone in the header pic?
peace & love
Jeevy
@cindrella-hey thanks for dropping by..glad u liked it
@raj- heylo...romba than paarittita enna nee...;)
@the protector-hehe innimel correct ah veran..:D
@brute- thanks yaar
@kk-haha...adhu elam s/w eng kekka vendiya kelvi....neenga yen kekreenga? ;)
@rajeev-hey thanks a lot...no no..its just some random picture i found...thought it looked nice..so yea :)
Hi,
If poss try to change the template of your blog. The color in BG isnt read-friendly.
-Ram
mmm..nice sweet 1...so what inspired u to write this...i bet u wudn't have have thot this out of the blue... right? ;)
@dakaltiz-yen da vambu la maati vidura?
nejama ithu ennoda imagination..;)..nambitta illa?good..nalla payan :)
@Ram-hey thanks for the suggestion...but i dont want to make my BG black...n i dont have any other dark colours that would suit...u have any ideas?
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